i am white
and black is Tricklev,
1.e4 e5
2.f4 exf4
3.Bc4 Qh4+
4.Kf1 Nc6
5.Nf3 Qd8
6.d4 d6
7.Bxf4 Bg4
8.Bb5 Ne7
9.d5 a6
10.Ba4 b5
11.Bb3 Na5
12.Nbd2 Ng6
13.g3 Nxf4
14.gxf4 Qf6
15.f5 Be7
16.Qe1 Qxb2
17.Qg3 Qxa1+
18.Kg2 Bxf3+
19.Nxf3 O-O
20.h4 Qc3
21.h5 h6
22.Rh4 Bxh4
23.Qxh4 Nxb3
24.cxb3 Qb2+
25.Kg3 Qxa2
26.Qg4 Qxb3
27.f6 g5
28.hxg6 fxg6
29.Qxg6+ Kh8
30.Qg7#

i played kings gambit....
and Tricklev also did that, but we drifted

3.Bc4 Qh4+
i think Black shud not have played Qh4+, i just think it had no depth, it only ends the castle ability, and thts it king is very safe there..

10.Ba4 b5
i wanted to maintain the pressure, but i think miscalculated i shud have taken the knight by the pawn...




now if black plays, a6,
11..Na5
12.
now i want to play c4, and the reason why i think its right is
12.c4 bxc4
13.Bxc4 Nxc4
14.Qa4+
it will make white more strong, so black perhaps might play otherwise like this..
12... Naxb3
Now i am confused what to play, either Queen takes Nb3, which brings queen in middle game, ends the pin for my Nf3.
but continues protecting it.

or i can play axb3, which make pawn island, and opens up the space for Ra1 to operate fully,
negative or confusing points are
a) opening up my a file will create opportunities for the Black to counter well.
b) double pawn on b file
c) pinning of the Nf3 will continue.
so i consider axb3 inferior. and QxNb3!
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but black can also play after
12 c4,

12.c4Nxc4
13.Bxc4bxc4
14.Qa4+Qd7
15.Qxc4Bxf3
16.gxf3

thats might be the best moves by black. so i think now c4!? is not the best option,

so now i think
either i play
Nbd2 or h3 threatening the Bg4
or c3

first we go by Nbd2

so now lets analyze these two moves.

12.Nbd2Nxb3
13.axb3

now i can play h2!,
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12 h3?
i do not like it coz Bg4 can go back at d7 and in future can come as a strong force on b5+
so 12 h3 is a bad move

so i have made my mind and i am going to play

12.Nbd2
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12. ... Ng6
i did not expected it, its a good move, but if i play
13.Bg3 ( it secures h4)
but it closes the game very tightly,
so better will be
13.g3 Nxf4
14.gxf4 Qh4
15.Nxh4 Bxd1
16.Rxd1
so g3 will be nice,
but black can counter g3 with Bh3+
but i think i can play it with like such....

13.g3 Bh3+
14.Kf2 Nxf4
15.gxf4 g5
so i wil play g3! and not Bg3?


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16 Qe1 Qxb2

Qe1 was a mistake...

17. Qg3 was again mistake...

rest moves were just.... normal....
black made some easy misses.......
anyways plzzz comment....

Ali Anzar

As per 3...Qh4+. It is a fine move. The only problem here was that black decided to bring his queen back to d8, effectivly wasting a tempo.
10. Ba4
You are correct, taking the knight via dxc6 is strong.
12. c4
The problem here is that it is not particularly forcing. black can simply play 12...Ng6 and still be better.
12. h3 is in fact a good move. What is important here is that the Bishop on d7 is not actually threatening to do anything for a few moves. Bb5+ is not actually a threat for some time to come.
12. Nbd2 is inferior to h3. Best for black here was in fact Ng6, as was played.
13. g3?
Not a good move. After trading , the pin on the knight is stronger than ever, and the f4 pawn can easily be attacked with Qf6, as was played.
Best here is in fact 13.Bg3 Be7 14. h3 Bd7 15. Nd4 where the pin is broken and your knight puts pressure on black's position from d4.
14. f5
Not the best of moves either, as it saddles you with a backwards pawn. Better was Qe1, and then aiming to trade queens if Qxf4. If Qxb2, then h3.
16. Qe1 was indeed a mistake, as was 17. Qg3. However, after 17...Qxa1 18. Kg2 Bxf3+ 19. Nxf3 0-0?? Black's queen is hanging! after Rxa1 you are certainly on top of this game.

In the end I would have to say that you got very lucky. To someone of your level I would recommend Bruce Pandolfini's Ultimate Guide to Chess. It should help you avoid some of the mistakes shown in this game. To name one, it will help distinguish which threats are dangerous and which are not (Bd7 falls into the latter category).
I've only done a quick analysis here, I could be wrong somewhere. I'll leave it to the big guns of the forum to get more specific

3. ...Qh4+ is a good move, as White can no longer castle. But Black ends up moving back to d8, which wastes a move. He could also play 3. ...g5 and try to hold onto the pawn on f5.

Not sure that Black shouldn't try for something like 4. ...Nf6 5. Nc3 Bb4, pressuring your pawn on e4.

5. Nf3 is a good move by you, as you get the classical two-pawn center with a gain of time.

White can win a pawn with 8. Bxf7!+ Kxf7 9. Ng5+, and the bishop on g4 hangs. Thy tactics are very important, especially when ahead in development like in this position.

Given a good hard calculation of your move 10, taking the knight with the pawn looks good, but gives up the bishop pair for a pawn that will soon be taken. If this were in a tourney or a club game, a good hard analysis of 10. Ba4 b5 11. Bb3 Na5, 10. Bxc6 bxc6 11. c4, and 10. dxc6 axb5 11. cxb7 Rb8 would be necessary to find the best move 10. All three are playable, but the best choice for you would be whichever you are most comfortable playing with.

13. g3 is a mistake. a) It weakens your already thin kingside. b) It strengthens your opponent's pin on f3, as no pawn supports your knight. c) You do not want to give up that bishop. It keeps an eye on the e5 hole and is your "good" bishop.

That is all for tonite. Will continue tomorrow (hopefully!).